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You sit there with your long brown hair and your cigarettes
I'm there with my awkward smile and my albuterol
I can't help but wonder if you'd want to be with me
I can't help but think that maybe you and me could be something special eventually

If I could take this chance I would
To make us into something good
But I can't seem to make a move
Because I've never been that smooth
And you're just looking way too good
I just can't do it

I crack a joke
You kind of laugh
I puff my inhaler
You smoke your cig
It all seems to start over again

If I could take this chance I would
To make us into something good
But I can't seem to make a move
Because I've never been that smooth
And you're just looking way too good
I just can't do it

This time is running out too fast
And I can't seem to make it last
The daylight has already passed
As she gets up to walk alone
I say that I could walk her home
She smiles as she takes my hand


I think that I just made my move
To make us into something good
I didn't have to be real smooth
And you're still looking away too good
It sure was worth it
©2008-2009 ~Darkh3art87
:icondarkh3art87:

Author's Comments

i wish it would play out that easily.

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:iconaristotle323:
Well said...well said.

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Aristotle323

Basis Virtutum Constantia
:icondarkh3art87:
Thanks, Aristotle.

--
She's dancing with the stars...
Living in the sky with diamonds...
:iconechopetal:
I wish that things would play out easily sometimes too, but I think that if they did, we might miss out on some of the best parts of life.

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Come on let's touch in that kind of I'm Christ and you're a leper kind of way. ~Noel Fielding

I find your beautiful eyes see right through me, so show me what you want me to be. ~Kevin Max
:iconelenor-lavish:
this is really good. how did you come up with it?

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You are you
as I am me
show me now
and let me see
what we will be
when we are we.
:icondarkh3art87:
its uh.. bits and pieces of things that have actually happened..
all except for the last few parts...

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She's dancing with the stars...
Living in the sky with diamonds...
:iconelenor-lavish:
haha. well maybe its like prophesy that will work its way out into being. thatd be cool.

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You are you
as I am me
show me now
and let me see
what we will be
when we are we.
:iconshadow-myst:
For narrative poetry, I really like it :)

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"Into life I charge, laughing..."
--E.E.Cummings

--"If you live life unplanned, everything comes more as a wonderful surprise."
:icondarkh3art87:
andy and i are working on putting it to music

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She's dancing with the stars...
Living in the sky with diamonds...
:icondarkh3art87:
it really would

--
She's dancing with the stars...
Living in the sky with diamonds...

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